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Reminiscence

Because
This is where I end and you begin

Come destiny – throw me into the dark womb of november
I ride on silent storms, to celebrate my past
The dragon’s child – feared by mankind
And I blow hope into your face – a demon’s fire always blind.

Understand my senseless touch
I was, as Him, conceived of a jackal
But my pain was even bigger than His father’s
And then you should pretend that I am
Maybe undead, but still alive, brought here to haunt ever again.

An overhaul – I come to bring deceit
Your majesty, just bleed through me
And drown me in a sea of sorrows
Pound in my chest, bring forth the madness from my head
And spread your light across my grave, allow me never to forget.

And do not cry, or you will follow
The nothing ship and my enigma
And this is where I end and you begin
Because just maybe
I am dead…
©2008-2009 ~AmunDei
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He who dwells in the blackened waters, shall rise to testify to his past...

*P.S: Please comment, I would like to hear your opinion. Ty

For the Undead, Darkness and Desire contest held by :iconartheeria:
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Very nice... and great usage of words. :)

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*grins* You didn't disappoint. Very beautifully written, with a flow I can't really describe. I mean... wow. ^_^

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So glad you liked it. Your theme was indeed something interesting to write about ;)

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>.> I would enter... but really, that doesn't make much sense, nyeh? XD

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Indeed, that the only downside in your case ;) Look for competitions yourself :P

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